"Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. Why? Journal. Share your thoughts, experiences and the tales behind the art. "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". They started running towards them as fast as possible, when suddenly, the sound of a fist pounding against the door is heard. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! I certainly am not! Let me tell you this! Understood?!" Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? A Happy Ending New Reading List. While we do so, sit on the couch and DON'T MOVE!" Lynn Sr.: Come on, let's go find Lincoln! NOTHING!! Goodbye for now. ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! Rita: Sweetie, please! "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. This is a family moment. Honey, we're back. I need to get out of here! Lincoln asked his parents. OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. You can never come back. Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. Ugh!" I already told you, I live here. Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. I can't believe I told him to back away from his own home! N Eddy's big picture show . Lincoln: I've had enough of this stupid costume! Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? He even throws many of his family's items out the windows, such as Luna's guitar, Luan's comedy props, Lisa's science set, Lori's phone, Leni's sewing machine and dresses, Rita's typing machine, Lynn Sr's cowbell, Lana's animal shelters, Lola's cosmetics and tiaras, Lucy's poetry book and coffin, the TV and most of Lynn's sports equipment. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? (cries). ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? There's no need to shout. "Sigh. Just tell us and well let you skip it. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. I can take being kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, butbeing locked out of my own home?! Leni: Linky, dont shout. A rather large family that sticks together through thick and thin. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! Lincoln: If they're so nuts, I can't be near my family. *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! I hate that you all act so smart and serious and important when you're not! Let's go! Lincoln said, as tears started forming in his eyes. As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. "AND ONCE AGAIN, I HATE YOU TOO! The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. I plan to do some more humorous parodies and some other stories that aren't going to be as serious as this one, so be on the lookout for that. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? Theres no need to shout. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. Lincoln blushed and hugged Ronnie Anne. Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. (Groans) I'll never live this down.(covers her face). I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! You think you can just say sorry after making me look like a freak and everything will be fine!?! After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. Two more squirrels collide into each other and miss the catch. Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. First, if they are to go on vacation by themselves, they let the kids stay at home, second, they agree to bring swimwear and wear when going for a late night swim, three, if the place they stay at is great then they go there for a family vacation in the future and four, no more visits to Aunt Ruth's. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Well just grin and bear it. I WISH YOU'D NEVER EXISTED!!!!! I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. After he said that, he finally saw his kids' faces and immediately started backing away, but the kids stomped forward, towards him and Rita and they completely surrounded them. Luna: [Blushes] Really? I hate concerts! And you better start talking now!". Anyway, as the title suggests, this is an alternate ending fanfic for Loud House Season 2 episode "Suite and Sour." Morag: is it now? "Get every available hotel staff employee on high alert. "Why?" ", (and that did it. (closes the door to the room) Lincoln: Okay then. Almost as good as any Ace Savvy convention. There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. No pun intended. I guess this proves it! ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! I'll just play softball all by myself! "Yeah, brah." Lincoln: (with angry tears) I'm throwing this stupid, disgusting thing away! "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. Turning to the siblings, he asked, "When are supposed to leave?" Things were starting to get intense in the Loud family hotel room. During that time, the parents spent time talking to each of their children and spending time with them during their activities. Kick the . At least this thick skin won't let me down! (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). We really are just a bunch of chickens Lynn: Fine! I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! SQUIRRELS WIN! Lincoln: Stop it! Which she did. ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? I dont want to support you psychos! Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Lori: WE'RE THE WORST SISTERS EVER!!!! (tears up.). He's just really mad, isn't he? "So just so you can remember clearly," Lincoln started with, before he and his sisters got red in the face, "WE HATE YOU!" She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" Slamming the sliding glass door shut, he turned around and glared at everyone in the room. We said we were sorry. Rita stood up and heads to the door. After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. ", "Can I just say that I was only out there because I was accidentally locked out." Lola: Me too! When they saw the lobby, they knew the bill was going to be expensive. We're already hanging on a thread as it is! [Normal - Remake - Original - Alternate Ending] 11 Louds a Leapin' Intern for the Worse / The Old and the Restless. Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. Luna: We just weren't thinking bro, we're sorry. alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. (he goes to the living room window. Rita: Lincoln?! Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. "Lynn? At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." (breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. I do not own The Loud House, it belongs to Nickelodeon Animation, created by Chris Savino. Lincoln: Throughout my life, ive been teased, laughed at, kicked out of rooms, blamed, grounded for petty reasons and done so many humiliating deeds for all of you! "Listen to what?" The family sees this and gasps in shock.). Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! We need it! He turned to specifically glare at the parents and added, "And just so you know, you're banned for life now. Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Right now." (Family begins to come around. "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. EVER!! (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. ), Lincoln: "What am I doing here? "Although," Lana, a six-year old tomboy wearing a baseball, added, "if it helps we tried to fix it." Lincoln is scared, expecting her to beat him up, but instead she wraps her arms around his neck and begins to cry), Lynn: (with a broken voice) "I'm so sorry Lincoln! Lana said, glaring at her parents. Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. ", (Lynn starts running towards him. Lincoln: I hate this! Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. We don't need to get violent here. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." Rita asked. Today I'm doing a new story called 'Hall Monster Linka,' as you can tell this a story that features Linka Loud and her brothers. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). You try dancing in this heat! Lynn Sr.: Look, son, families will have bad days every now and than. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" Needless to say, they were not pleased. Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! In order for him to not have "bad luck", his sisters forced him to wear a squirrel suit from Lynn's baseball game. 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. Ruthless People extended ending13. ", Baseball Announcer: "I think you're rubbing off on me, Pep. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! Lynn Sr. asked. ", Lola:[to the mascot] "Um, do you mind, fur ball? "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" And she knew it wasn't about any massive gathering of one group for some kind of event because she would've been notified way ahead of time. You can't ground us, we're the parents!" Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Honest! AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" Hope you enjoy. "What," Felix said, "what is it?" Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." Lynn Sr. and Rita were not happy to hear that, but knew that arguing with their kids would be pointless. It said "Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Im going crazy over you." Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. Once they fell asleep, they no longer had any bad dreams that night. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! I let my pride get the best to me! And he did not look happy. I loved it. Was the thought on her mind. Lynn: NO! She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. Would you mind me speaking to Angus for a bit? Don't fight now! "you bad luck, Lincoln!" [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. This proves it. I'm not bad luck. Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. I don't need anyone! I can't believe they said they'd tease you for eternity. WE WENT TOO FAR!!! Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. "Well mom, you know what I think?" Trying explaining that!" Can you please just come down here? Lana: (sniffles) Butthese were all our pride and joy! I hate it that you don't have any feelings or care anymore! I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. "Same here." You're scaring even me. nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" Bobby: Well, I hope her legs are capable of making up for it. Did anything bad ever happen at your concerts with me there? Lori yelled. However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. (He tears the costume off, leaving a very red and sweat-coated body in his wake. None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. You were fine with me sleeping outside and being locked outside? It was against the law. Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! Lola: You mean you dont want to support us anymore? Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. Lynn Sr.: NO! This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! ", Leni: (with a sad look on her face) "No. I hate gator wrestling! Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." ", Mascot:[in a familiar voice] "Hey, man! Keep on writing fics like this! The Louds. The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. (Lynn stops) "I forgive you. So expect a bill in the mail." Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. Lola added, shouting. I hate golf! "Good riddance." "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" I ADMIT IT!!! Theres nothing lucky about it! He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). Luna put. Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! We feel so ashamed!" Rita: (with a broken voice) "We're so sorry Lincoln! I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". An alternate ending to Underratedheros story, "Requiem For A Loud". We didn't find any though." The siblings had their arms either crossed on their chest or on their thighs in a wing stance, but they were all glaring at their parents. Rita Her Rights alt ending11. MY TROPHIES!!! luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. Pre-Story Notice: Hello everyone. Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! Lincoln: No, im your good luck charm! And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. I cant take a moment more of this! Lincoln: Lucy! You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . He even then flips over and smashes the trophy case. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). Ive covered for you guys, ive done you all favours, ive gotten you out of trouble, ive spent time with you and this is how you all repay me!?!? I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" (facepalms. 902 8 2. WE WERE NEVER PARENTS!!!! Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. I'll keep it between the both of us. Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. The last one he is shown reading has the Ninja Steel Rangers from Power Rangers Ninja Steel on the cover. This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? Ruth said, curious to where this was going. I will not be discarded and than used!! As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. Lincoln: "Coming!" "YOU HEARD HER!" "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." QUIET! Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. (Lynn looks confused.) She playfully rolled her eyes. i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Hahahaha! Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! "SAVE IT, RITA!" Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! ], Lola: "What's with that squirrel today? "Wait, what are you saying?" After a few seconds, the same pounding noise was heard yet again, this time even louder. "Her pudding is at least a hundred years old and will cause us all to go to the hospital for stomach pumping," Lisa added. Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt N literature No such luck: alternate ending 2 Add to Favourites Comment By iann28 Published: Apr 5, 2018 Favourites 0 Comments 4.9K Views *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? Tell the community what's on your mind. loud. (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! "What we're saying is is that you two are going to be confided to this building for the next 2 calendar cycles, only to leave for employment reasons or to get us sustenance from the one of our beloved stores." Anyway, enjoy. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. Lincoln: (tearful) No! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. [The softball playoffs. This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. ", Lincoln: "I won't deny that I brought this on myself. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. And after that, the whole room was silent. Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place.